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| Aemkea 2006-04-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so true! I love how you added 'all' to the beginning of each line; it brings the whole thing together. |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abusewell... ::eyes personal fantasy story:: i daresay i've been put in my place. I guess i really should fool around a bit more with my characters... thank you for the simple, fun, true, and thought-provoking poem ^^ |
| rag 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nice :P |
| adreamerami 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like this piece, and I normally never read poetry. Its really good and I totally agree with it. |
| Amanda Sky 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's so funny and it's really true. I thought this was going to be awful (honestly) since I had bad bad experiences with poems (-shudders-) but I like this one a lot. |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a marvolous piece, though I really like fantasy I have seen some of the cliches used. :P It's really clever in my opinion, I really like it. XD Its very simple in format and wording but that simplicity makes it all the more better, creative almost. :) I love the sarcastic wit presented in this, it is funny because these cliches have been used. ^_^ Well done! Thank you very much for the kind review on my poem: " Horror Films". I was thinking of deleting it simpley because of all the flames and now I'm not. ^__^ Thank you soo much! Also, fantastic poem. Keep up the good work! !~* Noelle *~! |
| thepossessed 2005-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's got to be one of the most hilarious (and true) things I've read about fantasy. It's refreshing to know I'm not the only one who walks down that aisle in the bookstore and sees about a million of the same size and length books, with covers depicting the same people on the same horses with the same outfits and the same swords. If my poetry ideas weren't completely nonexistent right now, I'd have tried to help you add a little more. |
| Infection 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseloved the simplicity of it, and the imagery. kep it up. |
| Keelin Rhayne 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseXD Good job. XD I liked it alot. That's pretty funny, and that's pretty much, like.. absolutely true, lmao. *claps* XD |