Nice. This has almost a prose-like feel to it, and the last line is cool. The easy flow of it keeps the reader interested, unlike some poetry I've read on this site.

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gah! fucking amazing.

I love it! The first two lines resonated very deeply with me. A very fascinating and beautiful poem.

I can't believe I'm the favorite of such a writing goddess like yourself. your sentences, so rightly long but they never trip over themselves. "a dazzling new sympathy for the symphony." THAT will ring in my head. forever.

Awesome, I love it! KEEP WRITING!

This is well confusing, cuz I don't know what it's really about. It's well written and deep, though.

I have no idea what this is about but it sounds interesting..i liked 'intoxicated disregard' (i think i like most things that are intoxicated/poisoned..in poetry, that is,no idea why) I enjoyed this piece. Do keep writing D

ah your poetry is excellent. definatly adding you to my favorites and keep writing :D

wonderful. just wonderful.

Every single line of this is so full of broken life. Can I tell you again how much I love you? I wanna grow up and be just like you.

interesting.. i like it