The last line 'Shattered, just as you life will be.' suggests something sinister...Great poem though. We all dread the day our love ones will never be able to walk this world again.

this is beautiful but i think thats what i usually say but really i mean it i'm just a terrible reviewer. wow anyway keep writing this is just great. oh and by the way this is my new pen name i got bored with firstkissatthepublicexecution.

beautiful, great depth and exquisite details! awesome work!