Hey!This is awesome...i absolutely love it! So well written and very descriptive. It has a lot of emotion, it almost jumps at you as you're reading. You can feel what you wrote. It's sad, but it's beautiful all the same! Good job, oh and thanks for the review. Nice to know you haven't forgotten about me! Hehe!your fruit friend,Cherryflavoredgrape (Natalia)

Ah, this is your language poem, now isn't it? I have posted mine also, just in case anyone is curious what Mr. Leickel's daughter shall be seeing. That poor, doomed child...

Anyway, it was very good...most certainly better than that one of which Zander wasn't so fond. Indeed...it flowed nicely. Your school assignments always seem to come out well. Yay, fun.

I love your summary, 'Opps! I got hit with a car!' Oh... Anyway, on to the goods! I liked how it sort of ryhmed, but still sounded like free-verse. It's a good poem of regret, and delves into the human spirit. I thought it had a powerful message, whether intentional or not, and I hope you write more in the future, you're going to be great one day!

Wow i liek this poem alot it has a lot of imagery in it i was able to picture the hole entire thing...GOOD JOB!