Bravo. I really enjoyed this piece. And to have such a dramatic and climactic ending. beautifully written.

That's good, personal, I can tell. I like your style of writing. Can you rr some of mine? Try A Still Cold Night. It really isn't even like your style of writing, but I think you might like it. Thanx! -gabriellafaith

I really loved the ending.

I love this poem up until the 8th line. The rest is good too, but all that white knight stuff just doesn't appeal to me.

Wow, I love the tone of this piece, and how it seems like it's back in medieval times. The vision of this poem is so crisp, and it's just wonderful. Wow, I am impressed.

wow, very powerful use of words~~ Reli nice~ Great work!

keep writing!

OO wasn't expecting that! The way you created this piece is amazing and beautiful. I liked the last line and the title.

*SW*

Thank you for all over your reviews! I can't keep up! : P I especially want to thank you for your review on "Full Moon's Light" werewolves and vampyres are the best : D lol

beautifully written. u crafted ur poetry so well, the details and all. i luv this! =)

wow. you're a really good poet! ^_^ great job!!

SP

"contrite smile", such irony! This painted quite a picture...good job.

Powerful piece of work. I like every single line, the tragedy is well potrayed. Good job here.

ur really really REALLY good with words...it just sounded really mature, if u know what I mean. really strong imaes and emotions, the last line was amazing. eh, i'll be thinking about it for the rest of thie evening ::shudders:: its so sad!

that was awesome! very well written

Wow! I think its' time for you to publish! not joking.

ever thought of a book for short stories and poems?? and than some longs ones too

GREAT GREAT GREAT

i LOVED THAT. especially the last five lines, so powerful..! definately on my favourite stories list.