|Reviews for Guilt without Redemption|
| Daemone Angelus 9/15/05 . chapter 1
Bravo. I really enjoyed this piece. And to have such a dramatic and climactic ending. beautifully written.
| gabriellafaith 8/24/05 . chapter 1
That's good, personal, I can tell. I like your style of writing. Can you rr some of mine? Try A Still Cold Night. It really isn't even like your style of writing, but I think you might like it. Thanx! -gabriellafaith
| fabiola 8/10/05 . chapter 1
I really loved the ending.
| Unholy Haven 6/30/05 . chapter 1
I love this poem up until the 8th line. The rest is good too, but all that white knight stuff just doesn't appeal to me.
| the.pink.life 5/15/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I love the tone of this piece, and how it seems like it's back in medieval times. The vision of this poem is so crisp, and it's just wonderful. Wow, I am impressed.
| mizu no kokoro 5/14/05 . chapter 1
wow, very powerful use of words Reli nice Great work!
| Silentwriter9 5/6/05 . chapter 1
OO wasn't expecting that! The way you created this piece is amazing and beautiful. I liked the last line and the title.
Thank you for all over your reviews! I can't keep up! : P I especially want to thank you for your review on "Full Moon's Light" werewolves and vampyres are the best : D lol
| Cloud Burst 5/5/05 . chapter 1
beautifully written. u crafted ur poetry so well, the details and all. i luv this! )
| ShadowPharoh 5/4/05 . chapter 1
wow. you're a really good poet! _ great job!
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 5/1/05 . chapter 1
"contrite smile", such irony! This painted quite a picture...good job.
| Werewolf Nighteyes 4/30/05 . chapter 1
Powerful piece of work. I like every single line, the tragedy is well potrayed. Good job here.
| arachibutyrophobia 4/24/05 . chapter 1
ur really really REALLY good with words...it just sounded really mature, if u know what I mean. really strong imaes and emotions, the last line was amazing. eh, i'll be thinking about it for the rest of thie evening ::shudders:: its so sad!
| angelxinxaxnightmare 4/23/05 . chapter 1
that was awesome! very well written
| Randall K 4/23/05 . chapter 1
Wow! I think its' time for you to publish! not joking.
ever thought of a book for short stories and poems? and than some longs ones too
GREAT GREAT GREAT
| Disturbed Cherry 4/23/05 . chapter 1
i LOVED THAT. especially the last five lines, so powerful..! definately on my favourite stories list.