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| simpleplan13 2008-02-08 ch 86,  | abusepretty awesome word choices in there |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-15 ch 85, | abuseI really love the last stanza |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-27 ch 72, | abusevery true |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-26 ch 83, | abuseI like the rhyming in the beginnig a lot.. ncie job |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-26 ch 81, | abuseNICE ITALICIZING |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 77, | abusethe whole I me thing is interesting.. I like the quoting a lot |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 78, | abuseI like it.. but why is only one l in all italicized |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 79, | abuseslightly depressing, but the ending metaphor is nice |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 80, | abusevery interesting... i like it a lot.. definitely makes you think |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2007-12-13 ch 76, | abuseCute...you've definitely been in England to long! Really, though, like the way the emphasis guides the poem! |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-13 ch 76, | abuseinteresting italicizing... I love the last stanza.. the first two lines are beautiful... and ps running again..lol |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-12 ch 73, | abuseso true and sad |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-11 ch 75, | abuseinteresting incorporation of music... i like it.. (not running, but exercising...) |
| Princess-anna57 2007-12-10 ch 75, | abuseThis is a great poem. Simple but effective. Great job. And I hope all is well Mani. Keep writing. ~Anna~ |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-06 ch 74, | abuseI like the line about the leaves.. lots of pieces about running and shoes... |