 simpleplan13 2008-11-01 . chapter 97Really beautiful descriptions and word choices. I especially like the first stanza. The whole ocean comparison was nice too. |
 simpleplan13 2008-10-30 . chapter 98Not really liking the second stanza, it's not my type of humor, but I do like the rest of it. Especially the first stanza that was really funny. |
 Rightest Rachel 2008-08-03 . chapter 5I think this chapter repeated the last. |
 simpleplan13 2008-07-28 . chapter 96I really like the beginning, it's such a poetic way to state something that is so true |
 simpleplan13 2008-07-08 . chapter 95I Really like 1 & 3. One was very true & three was kinda funny |
 simpleplan13 2008-07-01 . chapter 94I really love number 2. |
 simpleplan13 2008-06-27 . chapter 93I loved 3, 4 and the last one.. really great descriptions. |
 Alexis Grey 2008-06-10 . chapter 2Somebody's a bit patriotic.
Its refreshing to read that somebody really believes in the goodness of their country still, but at the same time, take care not to cross the line from patriotism regarding one's own country to over critical visions of other places.
That said, you seem fairly good at keeping the balance. |
 simpleplan13 2008-06-06 . chapter 90I really love the second stanza. Nice job. |
 simpleplan13 2008-05-18 . chapter 88Different format from your usual works... I really like it a lot. They kinda kinda be read separately or together... nicely done. |
 simpleplan13 2008-05-16 . chapter 87I like the statistics in the first stanza and the last line is really great |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-08 . chapter 86pretty awesome word choices in there |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-15 . chapter 85I really love the last stanza |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-27 . chapter 72very true |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-26 . chapter 83I like the rhyming in the beginnig a lot.. ncie job |