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Betrayal
mormon sexiness
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Hey god this rocks! Your writing really is wonderful (wish my writing was). This may sound cleishe and dumb, but it is deep. Can't wait to read more
sweetxinsincerity
2005-04-22 . chapter 1
You amazed me AGAIN. lol. i love the format and just your whole overall style...it's really great. i just love the tone of this poem, i guess, and theres a great ending. i think i'll add u to my favs.
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