Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: I'm Like A

gold against the soul
2005-06-17
ch 1,
abuseYou're 13? This is absolutely amazing. It's going on my favorites list. The ideas are varied, the language is origional - this is top notch, mate!
beti213
2005-06-14
ch 1,
abusewow. I absolutely love the stuff about the fingers... original and a little off-kilter while still making sense. I like how you never actually use the word "piano" and yet you describe it so perfectly that there is no way a reader can miss it. your writing is riddled with a subtlety few poets can employ effectively. keep writing!
cheeseworth
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abusei would go, 'hah, sucker! i remembered to review!' or something along those lines, but i figured it'd be somewhat redundant since the very presence of this review speaks for itself. so.

now that i've filled half the box with my rather embarassing inanity, my half-assed crit is kind of redeemed. or something. uh, i like the tone in your poem, your line breaks are good and yeah, i think i like this best out of your other works.

p.s. sorry. i'm too lazy to think of something remotely constructive.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-05-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is rich in culture and spiritual meanderings.
laundryshapedsouls
2005-05-15
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful.I read some of your earlier poems and you've improved so so so much. Great work!

ps: are you in CAP?
Cyssel
2005-05-09
ch 1,
abusemanuel fajar: true, Steinways are capable of making beautiful tinkling sounds. but a piano's music is only as beautiful as the pianist's skills. and you'd begin to wonder why you paid so much for a Steinway concert grand once the notes start to yellow if you've proved yourself too incompetent for the Mozart-rated keyboard.
Manuel Fajar
2005-05-02
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting perspective—life in a hawk's body with skyscraper window eyes—or, as Paul Erdos would say, "My mind is open!" Do you think Steinways are overpriced? They do have a beautiful sound. m
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-05-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was lovely, that was grand. I need to read more of your stuff. I have an insatiable desire to after this.
tablesalt
2005-04-27
ch 1,
abuseAh, beautiful. Particularly enjoyed the last stanza. Ha yes, Chinese is worth angsting over too. And maybe physics.
simpleplan13
2005-04-24
ch 1,
abusei liek all teh metaphors.. great job & thanks for your review
magicbubble
2005-04-24
ch 1,
abusei really like the steinway part. haha all about the pope and stuff, haha Vatican sounds appropriate.
Ohmm
2005-04-24
ch 1,
abuselove love love the individual stanzas, but I still don't get the flow. great job with the enjambement and choice of words though.
catseyeview
2005-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThis poem is beyond your years...the depth is unbelievable.
naomi
2005-04-23
ch 1, anon.
abuselazy to login. OMG, LIKE I READ THE FIRST LINE AND bang. i'm in love with this. (: i like the imagery, really. dusty and serious in a light way >< good job.
negligible fictional force
2005-04-23
ch 1,
abusewho are you trying to be; it's good stuff but it's not you i should think. -kismet.
Return to Top