LOL! wow that was really really good.

hallelujah! Someone who agrees with me! (actually, a lot of my friends agree with me, but that's not the point) I think the world looks so pretty in any weather if you just look at it and don't take it for granted. You expressed this very well. I hope you made people think!

very kool. i like how ur poetry isnt sad and distraught like much of what i read hear. not that i dont mind poems like that, but nice to read some that arent. well, very good, and made me smile. one of those deeper than it looks, poems.

oh, also, i feel awkward telling people what to review, but Stolen Souls is on a permanent hiatus, and i would request you review the other story. i enjoyed writing it at first, but the only thing that keeps me from taking it down right know is all the reviews people gave me.

AWESOME.

That's all I can say.

I like the way you always use contractions and things to make each character, you know, interesting. even if it's only a poem.

Love the ending. One of your best, I think.

Nice. It makes you think and I have to say I agree with the old man

At least you tried! Maybe a hearing aid would help...Great poem. Has a rhythm to it that's catchy.

I love the vernacular used in this poem. The simplicity of it really contrasts the profound message of the poem.

One thing I would mention is that if it's snowing out, I doubt the grass would be green.