I know this is from two years ago, but you said that all who read should review. And here's my review:
"She asked if the spot did I win" is a little off. It's like something Shakespeare would write but...not.
There's too much of the whole "give up" thing at the end. It's gets repetitive and awkward. Also, the lines start tapering off at the end, like you don't have a structure to it.
Anyway, did you get accepted the second time?
I got accepted into my dream school, but then I got kicked out at the end of the year. I was so heartbroken. That school was awesome. I hope that you got in, and were able to stay in. If you didn't, then that's okay, because you won't have your heart stomped on... as much.
*sniffle*

How can you say you are a bad poet? This is great!

It's good.You express your feelings very deeply (of course you do!)Rejection is a ** -_-Good luck with your next audition!

You expect that little bit of work to help you get accepted. Hmph! You are truly someone to be pitied. To think that could ever help you become accepted is sad. That was most definitely the worst thing I've ever read.

do you mind if I'm very critical? It was a good poem, but since you're submitting it to get in I think you might want constructive criticism more than praise... here goes:

The rhythm was good, the right amount of syls. in each line, but the rhyming was off. You altered lines and gave up on correct grammar to rhyme... And don't get it wrong rhyming is good, but it isn't as important as grammer and getting things in the right order... it just seemed like you tried too hard with rhyming and made it too obvious...

good luck with your school!

"I will be, this time, auditioning for the Theater and Creavite Writing Departments." So then, indeed, your poem should be 'creative'. It is not a bad poem, it is rather good, but to me its a little too basic, but then again thats just me. When I make my poetry, I like the reader to not get it at first, but instead think for themselves about what I am talking about, and seems like the readers like that. Just a little suggestion. -Gera

I think the... content is good. I think it feels like you tried to hard to rhyme... it makes it feel a little forced. I think it would be better as freeverse... But that is just me. I know how you feel kinda. I applied to St. Pauls, and I was accepted, but I didn't get the scholarship, and my parents couldn't affored over 35,0 dollars A YEAR. Plus cost of medical, some food, supplies, etc etc. I know what it is like.

I hope you get accepted.