I wonder, why is it a midnight whisper and morning dream at once? What does that mean? Perhaps it means that one only dreamed of the beautiful night. Or that one longs fo such a display. But I still cannot relate the title to the last line. I would very much appreciate it if you were to send me e-mail clearing my thoughts, for I am sincierly curious to understand. The overall tone is beautiful, just to be said.lazy

m...I like. beautiful imagery. I am pretty much lost for words. This is truly a brilliant haiku!

Beautiful.