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| Troubled Wolf 2007-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseThis sounds very good. But, I'm confused as to weather it will be a story or not? If so I would really enjoy reading it. Sounds very very interesting. |
| Katie 2006-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can't believe I missed this one o.o Almost a year to date when it was written, and now I stumble across it lol. You're going to tell me what happened to the rest of the story ;) You write things so well T^T I'm honored to be your friend! *hugs* |
| Pockymon 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHeya! I like it. Good premise. Rarely is the superheroine a wife/mom, so that's refreshing. Otherwise, it was like reading an LJ: comfortable, flowing in a stream-of-consciousness way, very unintimidating. Commas thrown willy-nilly, mix-n-match of quotes, etc. I'm partial to more structured styles, but if that's how you wish to write, more power to ya! |