This is awesome, great job!!

yes im too lazy to sign in. this poem was really cool. you did a nice job using sort of contrasting emotions. the rhyme scheme was nice too, you don't really notice it unless you are really paying attention at first and it's not to forced or anything. good job.

i love this...especially this part:"So this feeling will stopScream at me-So this silence will ceaseBurn me-So the fire will die"definitely heart felt and genuine. love it :)

very nice; powerful, emotional. i like your way with words. great work and thank you for reviewing!

very good. very very good.

Love it even though i don't totally understand*hug*

wow, u said my poem contrasted well, this , i think, blew mine out of the water. it flowed perfectly and the point was made so smoothly, i loved it

wow. this is truly amazing. "Either break meSo I don’t have to pick up anymore piecesOr find another wayTo guarantee-They won’t ever be mine." Heart-wrenching; passionate; beautiful! The only criticism I have is that daren't isn't a word. I don't know if you meant to do that on purpose or not, but it messed up the flow a little when I came to it. overall, what a captivating sense of desperation.

I was just broken up with and for ever it felt like i had feelings roaming inside me i didnt know how to express but your poem did what i couldnt