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| youzi 2005-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseYou've expressed he desolation very well. Do keep writing =D |
| The Magician (Joseph 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's pretty good for a away message, and it is fun sounding, but a little short for a ficpress poem. |
| swtdreamz101 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusehmm nice, gone gone gone, not even staying withint he very fabrics of life, nice poem |
| Gaki Toki 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseInteresting is what I have to say...and I do rate my stories R, or "M" on here...but I don't think I say why...of course with the summaries...I think most people could tell...heh... Lemme see...sex, murder...no rape but ALMOST...I got almost everything in there man! Ha-ha...mild pedophilia...well...not REALLY...he just THINKS he's attracted to his neighbor...he gets over it in about... five seconds. Oh well, sorry I can't please all, nice work here, intriguing to say the least. |
| Lizzybelle Kay 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuse"Never to be together, much too late for that."Beautifully meloncholy. |