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| soda.pop.fairy 2007-09-02 ch 12,  | abuseNice...really good:-) |
| cheesecake.thief 2006-06-14 ch 12, | abuseSo cute.. And definately...creative =] |
| cheesecake.thief 2006-06-14 ch 2, | abuseI never knew only one review was allowed for each chapter! [mock gasp] Well, this pointless 'review' was to inform you I enjoyed the previous chapter =] |
| cheesecake.thief 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry, I hope you don't mind but I can't resist pointing out that you mispelt 'popular' in your summary for this story. I know that everyone makes mistakes and all ^^';; but I just thought you'd like to know. |
| emi 2006-04-22 ch 12, anon. | abuseYou're story is very clever and cute and well written. the plot is fantastic! I don't understand why you have such a little review amout but that's alright!Anyways FANTASTIC story. |
| Katana146 2006-03-31 ch 12, | abuseStories as creative, imaginative, and well-written as this inspire me to write my own... so thanks! I love it! |
| Zaqqity 2006-03-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseAH! No! How dare the story I just stayed up half the night to read in one sitting end so quickly!Anyway, wonderful story. |
| I-love-bananas 2006-02-26 ch 12, | abuseGreat story I loved it |
| shay 2005-10-31 ch 12, anon. | abusesweet story. original. it leaves room for imagination. i love it. |
| shay 2005-10-31 ch 7, anon. | abusecreative. you have a wonderful imagination. Blake's really sweet and all, but if he keeps kissing her they are seriously going to stay stuck in that dream place. |
2005-10-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseIs this your story? |
| lauren45 2005-10-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseat the end, when you say she felt like she lost something, you didn't mean her virginity did you? and before, did she try to kill herself? ok, well, i'm kind of lost here so i'll just keep reading and hopefully all questions will be answered. |
| lyka 2005-10-31 ch 2, anon. | abusei get the impression he's taking advantage of her. or is going to. she acts like a freshman- how old is she? and why would a senior be so interested in a freshman he met outside the principle's office?? |
2005-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusestrange girl. it's kinda funny. i guess it's just because she was so nervous. |
| Alexis LePlume 2005-10-03 ch 12, | abuseW. O. W. I don't know which story I like better! Pleasepleaseplease don't be cruel like me and write a sequel! This really was awesome, and touching(sorta), and amazing and...and...No words can describe! I'd like to say I can see this happening, but there are some obvious roadblocks there. Still, probably better than anything I could ever write. Alexis |