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| Lavendar Lewis 2006-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a really good poem. I like how it rhymes but it doesn't really stick too closely to any set rule, it seems more natural that way. And I love the message of the poem! Good job! |
| EyesGoToTheSoul 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abusei think you meant "must" instead of "mush" but otherwise, good writing! |
| Draven DarkCrow 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseexactly the opposite of what I write in my poems, but I really like it, well done! xo |
| Shadow's Reign 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusethat wuz a nice little poem. i liked it alot |