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Xstacy101 2006-11-07 ch 1,	abusewhat a cute poem. the only part i would suggest a change is the last 2 lines. it's ok but it just didn't flow as nicely as the rest of the poem. maybe you could add one more line in between the two. how about... 'If u love me fly away, with me now, with me today' i don't know if u like it but it just came to mind as i read it again. hope i helped. good job =)
Leaving Here 2006-10-23 ch 1,	abuseaw! i love the last few lines! Liz
Reborn As I 2006-10-19 ch 1,	abusenot bad, not bad. "My thoughts are always with you/I always seem to miss you." seems to be the most genuine part about this poem, thus is my favorite part.
nights guardian angel 2005-10-28 ch 1,	abuseoh i like this one kathryn. i especially like the third stanza, lines 1 and 2. "Now the darkness that is night,Seems to make me feel alright" nice. keep it up. oh and happy birthday!
Rozovian G 2005-04-23 ch 1,	abuseHm... "struck me with your dart" is the only line that I have anything bad to say about. It's kind'a forced rhyme, which does show. But other than that, this is a wonderful piece of work, I say. I like the end part. Kind'a makes up for the forced rhyme, I think.