Hehe, this one is quite charming. With its schizophrenic-ness and all! Great job, once again.

hehe. Didn't make much sense so I will pretend you're scitzophrenic. :)

you must really like this whole "schizophrenic, conscious/subsonscious" thing you have going on in everything you write now. i like it, except that i had to read over it a few times to be able to see the rhyme, and then see the subconscious talking.

Swool. I like it a lot. The whole two person side thing is really cool. New perspective. and it was yeah back to back but they bounced off each other and that really seemed to work.