Unbelievable. It the essence of the word, it's pretty much unbelievable. Reading this (and most of your stuff) I'm here yelling at the screen to get out of my head. Emotions are a weird thing. No matter who you are, you'll always be different from everyone else. Hence why no one ever really understands. Although, this one...struck a nerve. I've come this far by living one rule. Remain cold. Don't feel, don't think, don't love. On the outside, I'm fine. I have one friend in this world, who understands that when I say "I'm fine" I'm telling them to fuck off. To everyone else, I'm fine. No one knows how I feel, no one thinks to ask, by the time they do though, it's too late and it makes no difference. I'm babbelling. I just wanted to say how much I liked this piece and you wrote it beautifully. But yeah, we're never fine.

i love it we all feel that way and do that at times some of us all the time if you dont then your a lier but yeah anywayz i loved it

o you do angst so well. this might not be a good thing, but then, since i cant do it very well, we'll say it now. i like the way it actually sounds like it could be someone thinking.u should try writing about something happy.. just for a change, maybe?

wow its amazing i can relatei love your poems

Wow. . .this one is fab! Excellent job with this one. (I hope you don't mind me giving a review for all of your poems)

*stands there stunned* Whoa...you had to be inside my head when you wrote this...I relate...way too well...creepy...this is AWSOME, though...I love it...*adds to faves* Keep it up.-pammy-

amen, this poem really reminds me of the Evanescene quote "don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" very well done.

xo

this is a great piece. i can feel the emotion in it. keep up the great work.

The ending, how true it is to everyone, was the best finishing touch you could've done.