I love it! actually, i love all of your stories! This one is seriously funny, i crack up when i think about it. (which is just increasing my family's belief that i'm insane... >_

great first chap!!

NO! PLEASE CONTINUE! That's no way to end a chapter... Damn cliffie-er. . .
So yeah, I liek Niguel, but we haven't seen SaSa in awhile, lol .And you never di follow up on his name!
Lee

LOL THIS SOUNDS SO COOL! And Thsi new guy SO supernatural!! I like how he fell asleep on Tok For like the whole day!
Lee

NO I CAN"T READ ANYMORE TONIGHT damnit,...
I SHALL finish this tommorrow... Mwhahahaha!
Amazing story!
And Evett is totally half breed. TOTALLY, man.
Tov is cool, so is Niga, I LOVE Sasa (gay guys are awesome!) Although you never did say if his parents had named him that, lol.
Lee

Oh my gosh! I read this story in a day, and it's so amazing! I generally don't like angelxdemonxhuman fics, but this one really works so far. . . .

I just found this story today. I read all of it at once. It is really good. I love the story-line. Thank a lot for this. Can't wait to see how it turn out.

Oh my god. UPDATE!~ *dance of glee* My life has been made. Toviel = NOT SMART. *sigh* Put the wings away first buddy. I've missed this story.

And another halfie shows up! I bet Steavan is half demon, on his mother's side- for emotional instability. Or would that make him a confused good guy. But half demon none the less. Or is that Evett. Evett whom I love almost as much as Toviel. Somehow I've pared Evett and Toviel up in my mind, cause Niguel, bless his soul, is so immature sometimes. Then again we don't know what happened to him to make him exactly thus. Otherwise I'm really looking forward to all the possible conflict coming in the future, and I hope Sa-Sa shows up again soon. You really so come up with interesting story lines and ever thickening plots. By the way, what does Toviel's golden eye do?

I just started reading this story and I'm already head over heels in love with Toviel! Though he's taking everything a little well. Kinda. Except he seems to be really good at denial. I wonder what happened to his eye??

yay!kya, took you long enough. Will you do it again in less than a year?!?

Oh my God, You are alive! You exsist!

Thank You for the update.I'm looking forward to more.Please update again soon.

I think Niguel is my favorite character. But Evett is a close second. Well I like the story, though chapter 14 has a nasty cliffhanger.

Oh my God! I thought you'd died or something.

I actually had to reread the beginning chapters so that I could remember what happened... well, it's really easy to tell that your writing has improved since the beginning. Once you've got some free time, you might want to go and re-edit those chapters.

Too many new characters at once for me... after these last few people are fully introduced, you should slow it down a little... at this rate, you'll have a million characters!

Anyway... you left it on a cliffhanger. Unless you're going to update soon (meaning in less than a year -wink-), you're going to have angry readers all over the place.