I love your poetry... I love it, darling, I love it!!

So pretty!!

*blinks* what can I say? It had a great rhym scheme... very graphic. In fact it was quite lovily and heavy...

not your best...i like the line "bleeding hearts begin to rot" its a beautiful image.

wow... intense. i've never seen saw, but my best friend said she is gonna make me... maybe i'll get some inspiration like you did! love it! thanks for the review/ myspace request!

Nice poem...contains a ton of descriptions...paints a very *bright* picture in my head...anyways...

Keep up the great work!

This weaves a dark tale well with a unique perspective. there is a great flow to your work, almost as if it lends itself more to song or music with the hard beats and images you use. Good as poetry as well though, but i can hear the rhythm in my head with this one, so i thought that i'd put in the lyrical applause.

Emotional and morbid. I love it.

I like the poem it is nice, most suicides usually don't occur with a gunshot to the head, I guess this person must have been really desperate.Anyway the movie SAW was kind of dissapointing I think.

Joseph

I really liked this. Everything fir well with its next line, and i like how you put things on the next line, so that iut helped the rhyming and held a grater meaning and impact on the reader. (i dont know if what i sed makes much sense, but that was the best way i could put what i felt in words.)Nice job anyway! ;)

I love this, awesome job!!

Hi, This poem is very powerful and the message is very clear. If you could maybe take a look at some of my poems. Keep Writing! Kylie :)

I really liked it!!

Very well written.

I really like that. Way better than anything I could ever write

Yess, 'saw' rocked ^_^ Hehe, this is amazing, keep it up.--pammy-

ooh ... how i love bleeding heart poetry ... its pretty even if its a little gory