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| Catseye*Rose 2006-02-04 ch 2,  | abuseOh, this is interesting! I love that last conversation between Canja and Aradon. It seemed so awkward. Hope you update soon! ~Cat |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-07-08 ch 2, | abuseI really like Canja at the moment. But then I'm thinking Aradon is liking him too! It is was quite funny the way he seemed to expect Canja wouldn't give him any work and would go easy on him. I feel for Canja- being put in a position like this. It seems to be against his morals but I guess he has to look out and care for his sister since he promised their mum. Still she's such a **! I'd really like to see her lose some of her haughty attitude. Get brought down a peg or two. I mean was she born like that or was it just the way she has been raised? What was their father like? Anyway, you have a good plot and have obviously wrote this with care. There was not one typo that I noticed. Hope you update. Luv Kaitx |
| The one you know as Jesus C... 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi...it's good so far...so it's prrbly gonna get better...meh...good job |
| R.Valaina 2005-06-21 ch 2, | abuseHi,I love this story, please update as soon as possible! |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat did he see? I like this idea. Women using men as slaves if only. Although I realise it's not just women using men it's different slaves for different purposes.It was justthe idea of the chained male I liked. I wonder why? The 13 year old girl, though, that bit I did NOT like. If only I could get to that slave master. gr! What I'm trying and (failing) to say is this made me feel hatred for the masters and symphathy(ignore the crap spelling) for the slaves. Just what you intended. The idea is good, the characters ignite strong emotions and the layout of the house is nicely described. I eagerly await the next chapter. Luv KaitX |