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| Paige Angel Lenaigh 2005-05-26 ch 1,  | abuseThis review is going to be really short... I love to hear this with music... If I said that... it was very good... ... ... ... ~Natalie~ |
| deathly-anonymous 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseYay! Ash-Chan, this one is 'amazing'! Hahaha. -eyes people- My word. No takey...Anywhoodle. I really like this one. I guess it's the first one I kinda could relate to a little. -cough, Brian, cough- Like "I burned everything that reminded me of you, Tore all of your pictures off the wall too..." It kinda reminds me of what I feel sometimes. Maybe like you still like the person, yet you hate them, and you hate yourself. So it's mostly like a confused feeling. That's what I kinda feel like when I read it. If that wasn't what you were trying to go for, then don't take it the wrong way. I just kinda relate it to what happened with me a while ago, and now. And that's what I feel like. YAY! -huggles- Im glad you made this one! You deserve an A+! Hahaha. Luv ya, Kara |
| tearsarefalling 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseYou know I love it, Ash-Chan. I'm sorry I sort of threw it at you earlier in the week, but it made me cry and I needed to get away from people. Anyway, very emotional, very true, you have an awsome gift, and I say you get someone to make it into and actual song. I love you, Ash! ~Mandi |
| Ice Dragon3 2005-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love your poem so much. It's great...it has a nice lyrical tone to it. :) Love ya, Ash-chan. :D |
| Justyn Mikail 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseOk Ash, I absolutely love it! And I could so see it being sung. You need to try and get music put to it. It flows so well and i really love how you used the rhyme scheme. It is very well written and you need to keep writing. So bi. Justin |
| breezy nostrils 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseSpeaks so much truth...especially the last stanza. I liked it. Keep on going! |
| sum 1 2005-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! I thought it was really good. It all flowed so well and connected. I really enjoyed it. |
| Chandra-Moon 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abusehaha...yes, very kelly clarkson-esque. I liked it though, it was well written. I needed you for the longest time/Now I see that you were never mine That was my favorite part ^_^ Keep writing. |