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| Aimers 2007-03-15 ch 1,   | This is definitely worth continuing. Please do; I'm very intrigued! |
| El Nino 2005-05-19 ch 1, | This is an interesting premise. I'd like to see how it develops. I liked the description of the receptionist with how she "sounded" brunette and attractive. Maybe you could add a little detail about what she really looks like when Daniel visits the clinic. |