Well, I had to read this a couple of times because my kitten kept jumping in front of the computer screen, but once I finally finished it... Wow. I'm in awe of your massive literary talent, you amazing person you. Not only is this poem well written and eloquent, but your words seem to leap off the page to paint a colorful, vibrant picture. Incredible job! I can't wait to read more of your work. :o)

oh, jesus. you're really good.you've done the film justice, which is saying quite a lot.

stunning. you are amazing- this... i don't even know what to say. it's perfect.

"sucking the life out of the Hollywood sign / halogen to make heaven bloom" i feel stupid for having you on my fave authors list and yet somehow not on my author alert! this poem is just a reminder as to WHY you're one of my favorite authors here.

"and slapped on the title of "Civilized Living."

Man...