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Saika 2006-08-30 . chapter 1
Hey. It's me. The Cherry Blossom Artist. The person who wrote that review for your SasuSaku fanfic. (Thank you for choosing to write SasuSaku instead of SasuNaru. I loved that fic and I would hate to not have read it)

I really liked this poem. I feel a serene kind of sense from it. Like it's glowing.
Smoky Bear 2005-11-09 . chapter 1
i hate mornings, but can appreciate a good sunrise if i've not been to sleep...

i also appreciate good haiku
cosmo-queen 2005-04-26 . chapter 1
Very pretty, I especially liked the imagery associated with "a golden whisper". Keep it up :)

*cosmo-queen*
catching-falling-stars 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
so much in so little. that was a very well written painting. never stop writing! @_@
sylvia's syndrome 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
Well, the image you create with this is certainty vivid. But I’m not sure what this was intended to be. It’s not in the traditional format for haiku (5/7/5) or tanka (5/7/5/7/7). But, glancing at some of your other work, the poems you have place in the haiku section don’t fit the format either, so perhaps this is a style of haiku I’m not familiar with. That’s certainly possible. Anyway, good job with the imagery. Keep writing!
Needa S 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
Beautifully done!
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