Your writing and word choice reminds me of the poets of old. Perhaps a gift from birth or an aquired skill but beautiful none-the-less. Great work, as always.

sharp and wonderful. indeed a poem that gripped me.

Really? You have to be kidding!? O__O Hatori/Ayame are so cute together though! XD Who couldn't resist? >=)~ The poem is adorable, well written and the use of words conveyes so many emotions. ^-^ Great job, beautiful deep and beautifully done!

!~* Noelle *~!

very nice. I like it.

Such a rich poem...so many word phrases with personality...fey archer, bolts of want, voiceless lark, on and on!My fav is love's soft regard verse. :)

evanescent dream down rode moon's glow,

¿did it not strike upon still lake's calm,—

rippling through dark waters silently?

¿or was it narcissus looking dour?

o no,—it was sly cuckoo's warble,

singing songs to woo moon traversing,

knowing that night's quiet interlude,

is but prelude to day's racuous voice,

in which awake,—we participate.

Gentle and stunning.

Hauntingly Beautiful

i grab the honour of being the first reviewer (: this is deceivingly simple. have i mentioned that your words immortalise moments?