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Reviews For: sunday's epiphany

Intimate Drowning
2005-06-22
ch 1,
Your writing and word choice reminds me of the poets of old. Perhaps a gift from birth or an aquired skill but beautiful none-the-less. Great work, as always.
Cyssel
2005-06-14
ch 1,
sharp and wonderful. indeed a poem that gripped me.
poetic abortion
2005-04-30
ch 1,
Really? You have to be kidding!? O__O Hatori/Ayame are so cute together though! XD Who couldn't resist? >=)~ The poem is adorable, well written and the use of words conveyes so many emotions. ^-^ Great job, beautiful deep and beautifully done!

!~* Noelle *~!
Written
2005-04-30
ch 1,
very nice. I like it.
THROUGHTHESEEYES
2005-04-30
ch 1,
Such a rich poem...so many word phrases with personality...fey archer, bolts of want, voiceless lark, on and on!My fav is love's soft regard verse. :)
Manuel Fajar
2005-04-30
ch 1,
evanescent dream down rode moon's glow,

¿did it not strike upon still lake's calm,—

rippling through dark waters silently?

¿or was it narcissus looking dour?

o no,—it was sly cuckoo's warble,

singing songs to woo moon traversing,

knowing that night's quiet interlude,

is but prelude to day's racuous voice,

in which awake,—we participate.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-04-26
ch 1,
Gentle and stunning.
Aslan Israel
2005-04-25
ch 1,
Hauntingly Beautiful
really
2005-04-25
ch 1,
i grab the honour of being the first reviewer (: this is deceivingly simple. have i mentioned that your words immortalise moments?
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