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| Intimate Drowning 2005-06-22 ch 1, | Your writing and word choice reminds me of the poets of old. Perhaps a gift from birth or an aquired skill but beautiful none-the-less. Great work, as always. |
| Cyssel 2005-06-14 ch 1, | sharp and wonderful. indeed a poem that gripped me. |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Really? You have to be kidding!? O__O Hatori/Ayame are so cute together though! XD Who couldn't resist? >=)~ The poem is adorable, well written and the use of words conveyes so many emotions. ^-^ Great job, beautiful deep and beautifully done! !~* Noelle *~! |
| Written 2005-04-30 ch 1, | very nice. I like it. |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Such a rich poem...so many word phrases with personality...fey archer, bolts of want, voiceless lark, on and on!My fav is love's soft regard verse. :) |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-30 ch 1, | evanescent dream down rode moon's glow, ¿did it not strike upon still lake's calm,— rippling through dark waters silently? ¿or was it narcissus looking dour? o no,—it was sly cuckoo's warble, singing songs to woo moon traversing, knowing that night's quiet interlude, is but prelude to day's racuous voice, in which awake,—we participate. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-26 ch 1, | Gentle and stunning. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Hauntingly Beautiful |
| really 2005-04-25 ch 1, | i grab the honour of being the first reviewer (: this is deceivingly simple. have i mentioned that your words immortalise moments? |