Wonderful. Although, I must say, I've read some of your other stuff, and I hate the names you choose for your characters. Other than that, lovely!

so. totally. rocked. awesome stuff!

Loved it!

You're a super awesome writer, did you know that? I probably sound like a little kid by saying "super awesome", but you are! I like your writing and I hope you write some more.

Loved it completely.

Umm...Can you be any more amazing? One of the reasons I don't do short stories is because of the difficulty of being descriptive while not trying to make it lengthy. It's hard, but I believe you've totally made me a believer. This coming from a (straight) guy's point of view, your writing can't be called anything other than flawless.

That was awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Oh... Intense. I do believe that is one of the most beautiful love scenes I have ever read. Passionate, believable, descriptive without being pornographic... Simply amazing. I really loved these lines >> "She flipped the light switch on an oriental designed lamp, comforted by the instant pale yellow glow the muted light emitted. It caressed everything in its path, gently illuminating, soft, placid." Your writing is so poetic and, for lack of a better word, pretty. I love it.

Another thing I really liked was how you showed progression of emotion through the piece. First their love making was frenzied and desperate, but near the end it was slow and sweet. That was a nice touch.

Anyhoo, fantastic job on this, and I will definitely be looking at your other stories. Oh, and it goes without saying that you're going on my favorite's list. :o)

fantastic! wow! ^_^ i really liked it.

thanks for the review, and by the way, i like the name Autumn! ^_^ you're so lucky to have that name!

SP

simply amazing...

Excellent!