No retribution - Whatsoever.

You know who I am.

Jesse. A Dandelion.

-Faye Coon

I don't know much about poetry myself, but I absolutely loved this.

I love it xDIt's so perfectly Jonah, but with better english! lol it's great. mucho praise in the poetry department.

Aw... so sweet, I didn't know he had it in him... poetry I mean XD;; Love is such a tricky muse. I like rhyming too, that's why it's called poetry~ Oh imma so stalk you now *evil grin*

o_o That was was so sweet. That mixed with you liking DNAgle makes you awsome. I love you! -tackles- not that though seeing as i have no earthly clue if you're a chick or dude. ^-^; -is on sugar high-

Aw...a sweeter side to Jonah. He usually comes off as such an ** that it's east to forget how hard it was for him to tell Josh that he loves him. Wonderful!

Aw! That is so sweet! n_n You're really good at poetry. I wonder what would happen if Josh found it. Hm...

Very cute, i'm surprised there isn't any swearing though lol. Love thsi story, update soon Xx

OMG! It's so cute! or, well you know...as cute as on's sadness can get. o_O yeah. Your good...real good. I wish I was as COOL as you! ^_^ what' ur sign? ...God that sounds weird.

Aw!That's so Jonah! *wants to hug him*You write very well, all around. Write one about Joshua to Jonah now! I'm a dork.