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| pagemaster09 2006-07-06 ch 1,   | Wow, I really must say, I can relate to this a lot. I really like it, and you can tell what your feelings are through this. |
| Lovefrost180 2006-04-01 ch 1, | WOW! that's the only word that comes to mind! Really good! Great job! |
| WaningMoon 2006-02-09 ch 1, | Nice...Really nice. But I think the impact of the words might have been a little stronger if you hadn't used exclamation marks, because then it's not like, silent anger, which is like way stronger. But anyway, I really like ths poem...Keep writing! |
| Cookie20007 2006-01-23 ch 1, | wow this poem was absolutly incredible! |
| Completely Incomplete 2005-12-14 ch 1, | Wow, that was very powerful and really good. I love how you captured the emotion so well, it's amazing.~nyghtraven |
| D. H. Laydee 2005-06-29 ch 1, | This poem is sad...it made me want to cry...you really captured your feelings well |
| Infinite Abyss 2005-04-26 ch 1, | Great poem. |
| write25 2005-04-25 ch 1, | THAT WAS AMAZING! The combination or rythm and ryhme, not to mention the amazing words spoken through to poem, just make it perfect. I really enjoyed reading that...it's always nice to read a heartfelt, well written poem. ~Mariah |
| angels-outofthe-ashes 2005-04-25 ch 1, | wow this is really good!! i really liked how you expressed your anger twards your dad, it was really...real. But yea keep writing and thanks for sharing your poem!! |
| Moosher 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Wow, That is seriously deep.. I like it though. Im actually quite close to my father, but I think the person that can really relate to this is my best friend.. N e ways, Great writing, keep it up!Much love, Meme |
| Hawk Mage 2005-04-25 ch 1, | That is nice too. Very very good. |
| darkmistresslae 2005-04-24 ch 1, | Wow, this is really powerful. I like it a lot, and I can relate to it so much. Really nice poem, the ending is especially moving |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-24 ch 1, | A good poem, overall. It's a good expression of feeling. I would suggest that you revise this:"And walk on [pass]" to "And walk on[past]." It will still rhyme just fine, and it will be gramatically correct. |