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| Eternaly Forsaken 2005-04-24 ch 1,   | This poem reflects so much emotion. I've felt this before and I hope never to feel it again... but I know somewhere in my heart that I will. This is wonderful, keep writing. R&R one of mine sometime. *~Evelyn Hayden~* |
| dcopulsky 2005-04-24 ch 1, | I think it could have more flow; it seemed choppy. The last stanza "Dont't look back/leave me, forget me" seemed to contradict the earlier stanzas' mentios of further interaction. |
| dcopulsky 2005-04-24 ch 1, | I think it could have more flow; it seemed choppy. The last stanza "Dont't look back/leave me, forget me" seemed to contradict the earlier stanzas' mentios of further interaction. |