nice verty well written please update!!-sammy-

I guess the long wait was well worth it! This chapter is beutifully constructed and I could feel it playing through my head. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Oh, this is getting even better! If there are any mistakes, the story had me going so much that I did not see them! Please continue! BTW, I've written a new Young Adult story that has two chapters of rants, one being on reviews. Check it out.

ah! it ended! i cant believe you ended it there! but i love it! your genious! i swear you are! (uh, did i spell genious wrong?... i get the feeling i did... hehe...)

Don't you just hate it when you forget to put the spells on the windows...? That cracked me up. Anyways, two reviews in one day cool...Question, could you review any one of my stories? I haven't had a review in a awhile and one nice one could cheer me up a little.

I apologize for all the gramatical errors in chapter two. I only realized I forgot to proof it after I posted it, thusly there's tons of things wrong with it that make me twitch.

"The Altair sorcerer felt his jaw dropping, and couldn’t help but stair for a few minutes until his attention was called back by Varian." I'm pretty sure you meant stare instead. Well besides that little edit I did, I'd like to say I'm still hooked on this story and I am awaiting more.

I can't believe no one has wrote a review for such an original story...I mean come on! Well anyways, I like the plot and Gaven seems like a realistic character that someone can relate to (not mee I get straight A's...)