Beautiful, and painful. Your words are so moving.

Very well done, a flow of words.

I really enjoyed reading this poem, much like the rest of your work that I have read. You are a great writer..

This is really beautiful. I especially like the last three lines.

dancingintheshadows

This really shows that love will have its ways. Very nice work

I nearly cried when I read this. It's so beautiful. Godspeed, Juliet.A. C. LaRue

again ... all i can say is that im pretty much speechless

Keisha MaKainn: "First off I'd likke to thank you on your copmlement on my poem 'Insanity'. Now, I would like to comend you on a wonderful job you are also doing on your work as well. Thanks again and I'll try to work on some of the lighter side if life. Keep up the good work, and may peace be with you on your journey threw life."

Lovely. The line you used in the summary was awesome, one of my favourites, along with "bit back the cry of hate to fall freely from his eyes". For critism, I didn't think that the repetition of "I gave my cry...I gave my cry to him" really fit well. Overall, this was great. Well done.

This is so sweet! It's so romantic. It really is good. You need to keep this up. And sorry for not reviewing earlier.

JB Madden

awesome metaphor