I liked it, mostly because I totally agree as to why Sodom and Gomorrah truly fell. It was because the people were immoral, not because they were homosexual. And if you read carefully in the Bible, it actually doesn't say that all of the people of Sodom were gay.

I like it. . . it makes me think.

YEAH YEAH YEAH! we need more straights like you on our side! god/goddess/other form of religious hierarchy bless you!Hugs and kisses!Tabi

wow.. scary because it's so true... very well written, and it rhymed! rhyming is always good...

I read your profile, and noticed you said you're straight, but a member of GSA... it's funny how everyone always has to say they're straight, but... lol

anyway, totally good job

XD YEAH Go... eh... the guys/girls who're aruging FOR gays. --; I totally agree with that. And you know, in the bible (or some other religious book... i dunno @.@) they say gays are sinners, but NOT lesbians. Why? Because the old guys who wrote loved to watch chicks to it... duh!Okay, XD so I don't know that but, hey it works right?

~Ari-chan

i love this so friggin much. write another or else i'll send my spork army after you.lol. i'm serious.

Well done. You have a great idea here - I think that it could use a little development... The beginning primarily I felt the first four lines to be a little different than the style presented near the end.

This was really expressive - and very moving. You should be proud of it!

of course its not okay to hurt or torment someone who is like that...i have a good friend who is...but this Bible I hold dear, just so you can get your facts straight, does not preach just love and tolerance. Have you read the old testament? If i had a dollar for every time God demanded men to kill people, even whole cities sometimes, I would have a whole lot of money. I know that seems merciless, but we dont' deserve His mercy. We, every single one of us, even the pope, if you will, deserve to rot in Hell for our sins. But Jesus paid for our sins, and God showed us mercy, and now we may be in the kingdom of heaven with him. I just hate it when people say that Jesus was beautiful and told beautiful stories, and wanted beautiful things to happen. Its SO not true. Sorry to all the Catholics who disagree.