Reviews for Shattered Glass - FictionPress.com

jellie bean 2005-12-09 ch 1,	abuseWow...really powerful words, I like the second last stanza. Great work.
Coping Mechanism 2005-04-25 ch 1,	abuseHey, I liked this one, I just have to say, the ending would've been cool, but you're adjectives contraict themselves: How can the glass be clean and dirty at the same time? Also you said clean twice... That is my only, other than that these lyrics are pretty good. Have you considered making a chorus for it? or are you trying to avoid it getting too repetitive?
Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-04-25 ch 1,	abusei like this a lot, really goes well with what i feel recently. the only thing that doesnt seem to fit with me is where youre listing the words and you put "clean", it seems out of place. but thats just me. anyways, awesome writing, well expressed and wow! its just that, wow!
Shyanne Kai 2005-04-25 ch 1,	abuseI like the end verse "And if, by chance, I land in the sea,You know I can't swim, but drown." I didn't think this made sense. The metaphor was good, but I think it should be worded differently. I don't know. Maybe it's just me.