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| smile persephone 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery is l o v e. This poem is just amazing. 'nova-filled riot of burning heat' genius. |
| Intimate Drowning 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI agree with the previous reviewer, the last stanza is extremely beautiful. The images are left in my mind long after reading it. Such word play. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful last stanza. Very sensual. Brava. |