Honestly I don't really like this story. It has some good qualities, but it also has a lot of bad ones.

First, Nora's kind of a Mary sue. I haven't really seen a genuine personality for her. Also your story is really jumpy. It doesn't really have a solid plot. You jump from one thing to the next and then act as if the last thing never happened.

You have potential to be a good writer but this story just isn't working.

Who does she love! Randy? And why the hell is Gidion being all moody and PMSing on her? Is it because he feels guilty?

XOXO

Wow, you haven't updated in a while. I really like this story. You should keep writing.

Ah...this is kinda awkward but the cat, it's named Aryan. Like Hilter likes the Aryan race kinda name...so...uh yeah

pretty.

i liked this. a lot. ugh. there's an overpopulation of lady bugs (or asian ladybird beetles?) where i live and now i'm paranoid that they're in my room. yeah.

Wow its really good i hope to read more to see who she will be with!

tHE STORY WAS GOING SO WELL!

I don't get it! What is he apologizing for? Ek they kissed! Yay!

Hey! I like the story so far, but one question: Wasn't Gideon supposed to have a nonnegotiable swim meet during this chapter?

hi

i luv ur story! and i kno the last time you updated was 2 years ago...so if u get this message, if u feel like it that is, could u finish the storie? i would be really happy if u wud and if u don't thats kewl i mean u prob can't b bothered finishing it neways...so yea i luv ur writing style by the way :)

LOLOL! This cracked me up: "The parlor. This house has a parlor. I thought those were extinct along with the dinosaurs and the red phone booths of England."

You've got a great sense of humour and this looks like it'll be with a great plot and some great characters too. :D *thumbs up*

i adore this story.

man... gid's her 4th cousin? it would be much better if randy was. doesnt it sound weird that you kissed your 4th cousin? UPDATE soon!

Ohmygod, ohmygod, the plot THICKENS! It's like some...thing that thickens! Like BUTTER! Or something..

Anyways, how could Gideon be so cold? What's his damage? PMS? Aha, just kidding.

Lovely story. Truly.

Oh my god! I have that shirt! Except mine's pink, and no one ever gets it. Geez, has NO ONE played Oregon Trail? Well, other than COOL people, that is.