pretty.

i liked this. a lot. ugh. there's an overpopulation of lady bugs (or asian ladybird beetles?) where i live and now i'm paranoid that they're in my room. yeah.

Wow its really good i hope to read more to see who she will be with!

tHE STORY WAS GOING SO WELL!

I don't get it! What is he apologizing for? Ek they kissed!! Yay!

Hey! I like the story so far, but one question: Wasn't Gideon supposed to have a nonnegotiable swim meet during this chapter?

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i luv ur story!! and i kno the last time you updated was 2 years ago...so if u get this message, if u feel like it that is, could u finish the storie?? i would be really happy if u wud ^^ and if u don't thats kewl i mean u prob can't b bothered finishing it neways...so yea i luv ur writing style by the way :)

LOLOL! This cracked me up: "The parlor. This house has a parlor. I thought those were extinct along with the dinosaurs and the red phone booths of England."

You've got a great sense of humour and this looks like it'll be with a great plot and some great characters too. :D *thumbs up*

i adore this story.

man... gid's her 4th cousin? it would be much better if randy was. doesnt it sound weird that you kissed your 4th cousin? UPDATE soon!!

Ohmygod, ohmygod, the plot THICKENS! It's like some...thing that thickens! Like BUTTER! Or something..

Anyways, how could Gideon be so cold? What's his damage? PMS? Aha, just kidding.

Lovely story. Truly.

Oh my god! I have that shirt! Except mine's pink, and no one ever gets it. Geez, has NO ONE played Oregon Trail?! Well, other than COOL people, that is.

Why would you be shocked? Why wouldn't we? Anywho. I still think it's kind of sudden for Nora to have such strong feeling for Randy. It never hinted at anything, and at most, it hinted towards Randy having feelings Nora may not reciprocate. I like that she has a way out of the incestuous relationship with the jerk wad, but everything seems so sudden. He wasn't the rude or snappish before the accident, nor did Nora show signs of this attraction.

maybe im stupid or something haha but im totally lost, so who does nora love?and why doesnt lucien have a mum, and why does gideon not love his brother?like i said totally lost

i like this a lot so far.

its really excellent, and i have to say, so far, its prolly one of the best stories ive read on fp

Sorry it took me so long to review!

I liked Randy using the claw to make her feel better. That's a fun movie.

Livi