You're right, it DOES kick **! Yee-haw!

Oh! Your poetry is just as beautifully written as your essays! I love this!

you're right, this does kick **! Nice sonnet! I loved how you brought it to a close.

Your right this kicks butt. I love this, absolutely beautiful sonnet. Makes me smile and yet sort of feel a bit on the sad side at the same time. I think you used wonderful imagery. I could see this poem, and it got me into it. Bravo to you.

Great use of imagery. Nicely done.

You're right.

It freaking kicks **.

Although just a formating rule, it looks better when it the lines are close together.

Breathtaking imagery and a solid last line. I expected this to be a proposal poem but now I am extremely happy I clicked on it.

Brillant.

Keep writing.

-Seras Nova