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| Rachel 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're right, it DOES kick **! Yee-haw! |
| Pixie in a Birdcage 2005-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh! Your poetry is just as beautifully written as your essays! I love this! |
| catseyeview 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseyou're right, this does kick **! Nice sonnet! I loved how you brought it to a close. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseYour right this kicks butt. I love this, absolutely beautiful sonnet. Makes me smile and yet sort of feel a bit on the sad side at the same time. I think you used wonderful imagery. I could see this poem, and it got me into it. Bravo to you. |
| Lost-And-Confused-In-His-Ey... 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat use of imagery. Nicely done. |
| Seras Nova 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseYou're right. It freaking kicks **. Although just a formating rule, it looks better when it the lines are close together. Breathtaking imagery and a solid last line. I expected this to be a proposal poem but now I am extremely happy I clicked on it. Brillant. Keep writing. -Seras Nova |