Oh my god! Eric is soooo hot! Every time he says or does anything I just squeal and repeat, "Oh my god!" Sound familiar?

Anyways I looooove this story so much, I was kind of skeptical at first because of the cliche plot, but I am pleasantly surprised. :)

And not sure why, but I squealed extra loud when he said, "yeah I know I'm not a virgin," it didn't really make sense why either. I think somewhere in my head that became a term that was all important for a girl and basically associated with only girls, so it was oddly refreshing seeing that. Yay for this story!

WOW! great story. I hope you would write a story about Eden. I felt soooo bad about him being left alone and going to another country! :( Anyway, I'm happy she figured out who she wanted to be with. :)I can imagine them together! So cute! :)) Could you write more stories like this! The next one i'll be reading is the rewrite to Seeing Double. Your final draft. I saw it just now when I was trying to look if you made any story about Eden. Maybe you could make a spin-off of Seeing Double. This time its about Eden. ;) I think that would be very nice. I don't want you to just leave Eden behind. :(( I can't get over Eden. I'm sorry. :))

Okay, maybe I'll start reading your final draft now. :))

don't delete please!

Aw that is so sweet. I knew they would end up together but I adored how you made it come true. Awesome job.

It seems like you kinda just jumped right to the story which is good in a few cases but not really in this story. However, I really liked this chapter. It was silly and fun, it showed the characters' personalities, and it made me totally hooked. :D

Wow! Really good story, you had me hanging on to every word all the way to the end!

Hm so far, Devan's past reminds me a bit of the myth called Deerskin. It's about a girl who's sexually abused by her father because he thinks she's actually her mom (the resemblance between the two is so similar it drives her father insane)

i loved this story. all the way through i was cheering for eric lol. i was really unsure at first who you'd pick but eric was the one yay lol. i think devon's past was really horrible and i wouldnt want it to ever happen to anyone ever. you're a really good writer and i just fell in love with eric lol

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I really enjoyed this story...it flowed wonderfully, the idea was wonderful, and I am so overjoyed that it was Eric who got Devon...I always liked him better for some reason...off to read some more of your stories!

So, does Eden get a girl too? When can we expect that story?

Aw...they didn't match the pictures or something.

I LOVE THIS SOTRY! I READ IT LONG TIME AGO AND NEVER GOT TO UPDATE! WELL HEARS UR REVIW! ]]

i loved the story! love it love it.

sincerely,

ALS

hehe

Can you submit Eden into a psychiatric hospital or write a sequel for his own romance? xD