don't delete please!

Aw that is so sweet. I knew they would end up together but I adored how you made it come true. Awesome job.

It seems like you kinda just jumped right to the story which is good in a few cases but not really in this story. However, I really liked this chapter. It was silly and fun, it showed the characters' personalities, and it made me totally hooked. :D

Wow! Really good story, you had me hanging on to every word all the way to the end!

Hm so far, Devan's past reminds me a bit of the myth called Deerskin. It's about a girl who's sexually abused by her father because he thinks she's actually her mom (the resemblance between the two is so similar it drives her father insane)

i loved this story. all the way through i was cheering for eric lol. i was really unsure at first who you'd pick but eric was the one yay lol. i think devon's past was really horrible and i wouldnt want it to ever happen to anyone ever. you're a really good writer and i just fell in love with eric lol
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I really enjoyed this story...it flowed wonderfully, the idea was wonderful, and I am so overjoyed that it was Eric who got Devon...I always liked him better for some reason...off to read some more of your stories!

So, does Eden get a girl too? When can we expect that story?

Aw...they didn't match the pictures or something.

I LOVE THIS SOTRY! I READ IT LONG TIME AGO AND NEVER GOT TO UPDATE! WELL HEARS UR REVIW! =]]

i loved the story! love it love it.

sincerely,
ALS

hehe

Can you submit Eden into a psychiatric hospital or write a sequel for his own romance? xD

Oh, wow, you've finished it! T_T Damn, I should've came back to this site earlier... >.

uhh, just to let you know, blackouts usually mean that all the electricity goes out. meaning the phones don't work. but w.e it's your story.