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| Gentle. Edge. 2008-04-15 ch 25,  | abuseAw that is so sweet. I knew they would end up together but I adored how you made it come true. Awesome job. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseIt seems like you kinda just jumped right to the story which is good in a few cases but not really in this story. However, I really liked this chapter. It was silly and fun, it showed the characters' personalities, and it made me totally hooked. :D |
| LoneRanger 2007-12-08 ch 25, anon. | abuseWow! Really good story, you had me hanging on to every word all the way to the end! |
| lilylupin7 2007-10-14 ch 3, | abuseHm so far, Devan's past reminds me a bit of the myth called Deerskin. It's about a girl who's sexually abused by her father because he thinks she's actually her mom (the resemblance between the two is so similar it drives her father insane) |
| LadyLush 2007-08-03 ch 25, | abusei loved this story. all the way through i was cheering for eric lol. i was really unsure at first who you'd pick but eric was the one yay lol. i think devon's past was really horrible and i wouldnt want it to ever happen to anyone ever. you're a really good writer and i just fell in love with eric lol x |
| Kathleen Moon 2007-08-01 ch 25, | abuseI really enjoyed this story...it flowed wonderfully, the idea was wonderful, and I am so overjoyed that it was Eric who got Devon...I always liked him better for some reason...off to read some more of your stories! |
| boredom-sucks-ass 2007-06-12 ch 10, | abuseSo, does Eden get a girl too? When can we expect that story? |
| boredom-sucks-ass 2007-06-12 ch 25, | abuseAw...they didn't match the pictures or something. |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2007-05-06 ch 25, | abuseI LOVE THIS SOTRY! I READ IT LONG TIME AGO AND NEVER GOT TO UPDATE! WELL HEARS UR REVIW! =]] |
| Another Lone Stranger 2007-04-05 ch 25, | abusei loved the story! love it love it. sincerely, ALS |
| stuck up 2007-04-04 ch 25, | abusehehe |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-02-26 ch 25, | abuseCan you submit Eden into a psychiatric hospital or write a sequel for his own romance? xD |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-02-26 ch 24, | abuseOh, wow, you've finished it! T_T Damn, I should've came back to this site earlier... >. |
| Miss Secret 2007-01-14 ch 2, | abuseuhh, just to let you know, blackouts usually mean that all the electricity goes out. meaning the phones don't work. but w.e it's your story. |
| dreamgazer220 2007-01-05 ch 25, | abuseWow. I can't believe I never reviewed the epilogue!! It was cute, I really liked this story. I'm glad that things worked out in the end. :) |