wah... teh profound meaning and heart of this poem... amazes me~

keep writing!

I like the end: "If God forgives all, he must be forgiven."

Lovely poetry as usual. I especially love the personification/symbolism of the pleated skirts and starched collars. Great job! Oh, and I love your new fp profile--entirely entertaining, and so *you*! :D

G. London

I like the message you share here. Sort of the if you want forgiveness, then you better learn how to change... dont be a poser. I enjoyed this. The beginging made me smile a bit. The nuns and children laughing rumors, seems the norm...until you figure things out. Good write though. Bravo.

Good poem! I liked it a lot.

poetic. what more? ^^expected nothing less from you.

kakyou