Hm, very symbolic.

i like this, it's short length prevents the rhyme scheme from being tiring. As an extended metaphor it can be applied to many things, cool work!

wow, i thought that was brilliant, all ur sentences were like perfect i wouldnt change for reviewing some of my stuff as well, and no im not french lol, just think its a beautiful languagexxCia

hey dragoness! awesome poem loved it. wow it was soo good! i'm going to go read some more now!bye,cassie (thats now what i sign off as sometimes)