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| Ken-Ken2 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like it! I'm shocked that you could just come up with it in English Class. I mean not shocked... Forget the whole thing. Very good poem! |
| sarah1491 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, very nicely done. I like the italicized text at the end of each stanza. Nice emphasis. :D |
| myfathersdaughter 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseYou write really well and can tell that you are a person who is a deep thinker. By the way thanks for the r&r. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusei luv the depth and feelings and emotions conveyed via ur poem. and it is very well written and just awesome! |
| His Only 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI am speachless!! That was... gosh that was so beautiful! WOW! I can't say how touching this is... just like everything you write. It always leaves me open-mouthed. In this particular poem, I found that I loved the last lines in each verse. It worked so well and it was just so... aww! I can really relate, which I suppose makes the poem more real to me. Once again, great work and keep it up! I am looking foward to your next piece. May God continue to bless you! |