   sugarbarbie 2005-08-03 . chapter 16Keep the story coming...I have been enjoying this one just as much as your other one. Update soon! :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-07-29 . chapter 15 Another great chapter...looking forward to your next update...:) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-07-08 . chapter 14 Great chapter. Looking forward to your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-06-22 . chapter 13 Another great chapter...Looking forward to your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-06-17 . chapter 12 Loving the story...Looking forward to your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-06-09 . chapter 11 I am really enjoying your story...I am looking forward to your next update. :) |
 C.D.Buder 2005-06-08 . chapter 1I like this story, though im used the D&D dragons of Faurun. |
 WickedMoonie 2005-06-07 . chapter 11this is a great story!keep writing, I like how you do it.I'll await for the next chap!! |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-20 . chapter 8 Great chapter. I await your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-14 . chapter 7 Great chapter. Looking forward to your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-12 . chapter 6 Great chapter. Update soon. :) |
 Singing Sarah 2005-05-06 . chapter 1Very good descriptions, but its a little hard to follow. You seem to jump from one place to the other very quickly. I think you even jumped time periods at the start. hm. . . I should re-read the first. Just something to keep in mind because it gets a bit confusing. |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-06 . chapter 5 Great story...loving it. Looking forward to your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-05 . chapter 4 Great chapter. I am enjoying this story along with your other one. Waiting for your next update. :) |
| sugarbarbie 2005-05-02 . chapter 3 Great chapter. Looking forward to reading more. Keep the updates coming on this one too! :) |
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