Ugh, I've felt this before-the just shattered nothingness that engulfs your soul, leaves you in the dark with your thoughts and regrets...and then suddenly, everything feels to crumble around you and you can do no right-everytime you try to correct something, you just feel more and more broken... its like, those times when you just feel the world completely out of your control and you realize you can do nothing more but let whatever happen, just happen

wonderful write! very deep and relatable, your word usage is perfect again in the way that it does not over-complicate the poem

_ keep up the writing!