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silent stationery
2005-05-08
ch 1, anon.
abusehello this is the poem i always wanted to write. unfairr! but you probably did a better job of it than i could have ever done so, there.
Written
2005-04-30
ch 1,
abusethat was. wow. very nicely done. So sad, and funny, and cute, and terrible, and true.
poetic abortion
2005-04-29
ch 1,
abuse^-^ This was really interesting, yes I really liked it though. My opinion, I think you do a phenominal job with your haikus, it amazes me how much emotion you put into your works. *-* I really liked this to, I thought it was extremely cute if not bittersweet / humorous. It really was true though: " Elaborate half-truths regarding my life " I believe that is a very true line when it comes to people and the internet, though it isn't always true but sometimes people do display themselves as such in their own internet persona. ^^; I'm blabing. -__-; Great job on the poem, really well written and well put. XD

!~* Noelle *~!
Manuel Fajar
2005-04-28
ch 1,
abuseso many myths typed on a screen,

¿who knows what lives they have all seen?

they may not even their hair preen,

and all their lies may be quite keen,

i know some of them are quite mean,

though some funny as mr. bean,

most often times remain unseen,

¿do you think one of them queen?

p.s. *sound of throat clearing* *extremely puzzled look* (¿you're shy?)
philoslove
2005-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI prefer your other poems and hiakus so to speak... but this was interesting. An interesting viewpoint. Singapore: The Little Red Dot. Everytime I read it somewhere, I'll get a bit excited, cos I've met too many an Ignoramus who doesn't know it exists, or else it's in China. Yoh... i live there, you see.
Aslan Israel
2005-04-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. Just perfect. I know I've been here... I just don't know what to say.. This is perfect.
THROUGHTHESEEYES
2005-04-27
ch 1,
abuseGood point. There are successful matches that did originate via internet.You're right though, must keep things in perspective. Great one.
AboveTheSalt
2005-04-26
ch 1, anon.
abusetoo lazy to log in, but this was wonderful. SO so so so so true. Love the lyrics at the beginning, great inspiration. How alluring technology has become! Great subject. I also enjoyed the line breaks. I love unique line breaks. This is sad only because it's real.
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