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| silent stationery 2005-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abusehello this is the poem i always wanted to write. unfairr! but you probably did a better job of it than i could have ever done so, there. |
| Written 2005-04-30 ch 1,  | abusethat was. wow. very nicely done. So sad, and funny, and cute, and terrible, and true. |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuse^-^ This was really interesting, yes I really liked it though. My opinion, I think you do a phenominal job with your haikus, it amazes me how much emotion you put into your works. *-* I really liked this to, I thought it was extremely cute if not bittersweet / humorous. It really was true though: " Elaborate half-truths regarding my life " I believe that is a very true line when it comes to people and the internet, though it isn't always true but sometimes people do display themselves as such in their own internet persona. ^^; I'm blabing. -__-; Great job on the poem, really well written and well put. XD !~* Noelle *~! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseso many myths typed on a screen, ¿who knows what lives they have all seen? they may not even their hair preen, and all their lies may be quite keen, i know some of them are quite mean, though some funny as mr. bean, most often times remain unseen, ¿do you think one of them queen? p.s. *sound of throat clearing* *extremely puzzled look* (¿you're shy?) |
| philoslove 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI prefer your other poems and hiakus so to speak... but this was interesting. An interesting viewpoint. Singapore: The Little Red Dot. Everytime I read it somewhere, I'll get a bit excited, cos I've met too many an Ignoramus who doesn't know it exists, or else it's in China. Yoh... i live there, you see. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just perfect. I know I've been here... I just don't know what to say.. This is perfect. |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseGood point. There are successful matches that did originate via internet.You're right though, must keep things in perspective. Great one. |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abusetoo lazy to log in, but this was wonderful. SO so so so so true. Love the lyrics at the beginning, great inspiration. How alluring technology has become! Great subject. I also enjoyed the line breaks. I love unique line breaks. This is sad only because it's real. |