Cute poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice stuff, I like the thought behind this, and all the comparisons of one image to another. The last lines are moving, they make you think, and wonder. Are the stars just kept in a jar that we may open? I really love that idea.

Bubbles as rainbow glass is also a nifty image. I could probably point out a whole bunch of nifty images, but I don't need to, I'll say that you have a whole bunch. :) As usual, great rhythm and rhyming...I'm a sucker for song-like poems. :)

I like that. Very pretty. Interestingly written. Good work.

Perfect. I loved every moment of it.

That was nice. Good imagery, good flow- really pretty, for my tired mind to say. Great job.

Wow...so nicely worded...I wish I could write poetry like that *wistful sigh*

WOW, that was a powerfull and really good poem- i love it!