i like this a lot. i like the turn of feeling almost at the end there. i can relate to this a lot and i like the way its able to be understood as so many things. good concept and nice descriptions. i liked this line a lot : I exist simply to feel within a world I can never see.

nice job! and thanks for the review btw ;)

Now this is really, really good. Reads so much like a story.

wow, this is a really good poem.. i wish i could write like you. i'm surprised that you've only got 2 reviews on this one... awesome stuff like usual!~baby dyke rae~

I do not understand you at all. You always say you hate poetry, but then you pull off some of the coolest stuff I've ever seen. You really know how to write, so don't let that talent go to waste. We can see you like to write, and you really catch the views of depressed people in your writing.