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Dr. Colleen
2005-05-11
ch 3,
abuseYou are right, I do like this one...it really clips along. I sincerely hope your character and my character never meet though...that could be dangerous. ALthough on second thought:Morgan could use some help from the sneakiest kid this side of the Mississippi...Dr. Colleen
ode to a firefly
2005-04-26
ch 3,
abuseCongrats on three whole chapters. Now you need to corner Lauren and beat some more good ideas out of her, then write some more! It's such a cute story. :)
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