| Reviews for Regret |
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KingdomRain 5/18/06 . chapter 1...i liked it... |
creater101 10/21/05 . chapter 1I feel and understand this. And I wonder how people can have regret over things. Wonderful poem |
Isis ShadowWolf 8/16/05 . chapter 1Inspiring and thought-provoking. |
binderem 8/15/05 . chapter 1This is excellent. I love the style of it! The only flaw were a few simple spelling errors (you often said 'to' instead of 'too'), but those don't really matter in a poem like this. It had a good message. Keep writing! |
Aaya 5/14/05 . chapter 1I've read some of your other poems, and they are wonderful. You write some of the best poems I've ever read! Keep going! |
wishingdreamingwaiting 5/13/05 . chapter 1...Wow. That was excellent! _ Honestly! The flow was smooth and poem itself was great. I especially like the line "I cut my fingers to pieces/sewing curtains for you/to keep/all that you lack/from swimming to the surface..." It feels like there's a much deeper meaning to this poem. Keep it up! |
Ahemait 5/9/05 . chapter 1rather long, but still very good. i like the line you kept repeating, even though it is rephrased slightly each time, 'I regret simply that I have regretted.' it's a very good line. well done poem |
cake-is-good 5/7/05 . chapter 1to true for i reall liked this one. i really hit somthin inside of me nice work |
Fabian Cortez 5/5/05 . chapter 1To consider thoughts as this, indeed encourages inner growth, and in turn enables valued lessons, unrepeated actions, and so again inturn regret becomes a positive. Well written and thought out as always. KEEP WRITING! F.C |
boy that you loved 5/3/05 . chapter 1very nice, your imagery is enjoyable. good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh' |
simpleplan13 4/29/05 . chapter 1awesome.. although the actual liens with regret in them semiconfused me..lol |
His Only 4/27/05 . chapter 1Oh my gosh! I loved this! Wow you did an amazing job with this one. The stlye and the rhythm... it all worked so well. And the message was so creative! "I regret only that I have felt regret." I would never have thought up something like that. Great work! You are an excellent poet. Keep up all the good work! |
CostumeForAGutterball 4/26/05 . chapter 1thanks! |